08 September 2010 — 01:09

Does my advertisment sound ok?

We do web designing and online marketing to bring more customers and sales to your site. Contact Durdana at 336 388 0248, 336 514 5537 or durdana@durdana.com for a ½-hour FREE consultation. I am writing this in a bordered box, with my company logo on the top of the box. I am new to print advertising so does that sound ok?

2 Comments

  1. mike

    The 1/2 free, the whole consultation should be free, I am sure 30mins is more then enough time. More then having a saying like that you will need to prove that you can really do it, so show it with your accomplishments (portfolio) is your best way to advertise.

    Good Luck!

  2. Leslie K

    Use as many action words as possible and remove anything that is unnecessary.

    Web designing and targeted online marketing that will drive targeted customers to your site and increase sales. FREE consultation! Call Durdana at XXX or email at: xxx for your FREE 1/2 hour consultation today.

    When advertising use what’s called a “call to action. ” In other words, don’t ask – TELL them to call you. Demand it! But also give them a compelling reason.

    This holds true with website sales too. You’ve got to write your text in such a way that it demands the reader take action.




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